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The voices coming louder now
The thoughts before your final bow
A million people all in one
Never ending until we're done
Your final breath and still they scream
Casting away your every dream
One after another the thoughts arrive
But from your mind not all derive
Another you inside your head
Another you that holds a thread
How many will come till this is through
Was that a fake or really you
These people you hear, but cannot see
Take over your mind till you aren't free
Time alone you can have no more
They know your thoughts and make thinking a chore
Your every plan they also know
Causing the madness to forever grow
The more you hear the worse it gets
On how long you'll last they're taking bets
The people who love you say they'll listen
Yet it seems at times the sun can't glisten
A hundred voices inside your mind
As you wonder if it's your own you find
Here we go, it's time to end
A message to them it's time to send
But they can stop you, and end your action
They have become more than just a mere distraction
Your very being you must accept
To share your mind is a new concept
Yet to survive you must get along
And let those who love you help make you strong
One more comes with each new day
For them to stop you now pray
Something snaps and you learn to cope
Once again you can find your hope
The sun begins to come again
And you can hide from voices deep within
Together as one yet different as well
A curse or a gift, it's hard to tell
But you accept this fact and carry on
And follow the path of a brand new dawn
The path of those with many minds, that reside in one body. Though at times can be difficult, can also have it's own unique advantages. Never lose hope in yourself, even if the others in your mind have given up.
The thoughts before your final bow
A million people all in one
Never ending until we're done
Your final breath and still they scream
Casting away your every dream
One after another the thoughts arrive
But from your mind not all derive
Another you inside your head
Another you that holds a thread
How many will come till this is through
Was that a fake or really you
These people you hear, but cannot see
Take over your mind till you aren't free
Time alone you can have no more
They know your thoughts and make thinking a chore
Your every plan they also know
Causing the madness to forever grow
The more you hear the worse it gets
On how long you'll last they're taking bets
The people who love you say they'll listen
Yet it seems at times the sun can't glisten
A hundred voices inside your mind
As you wonder if it's your own you find
Here we go, it's time to end
A message to them it's time to send
But they can stop you, and end your action
They have become more than just a mere distraction
Your very being you must accept
To share your mind is a new concept
Yet to survive you must get along
And let those who love you help make you strong
One more comes with each new day
For them to stop you now pray
Something snaps and you learn to cope
Once again you can find your hope
The sun begins to come again
And you can hide from voices deep within
Together as one yet different as well
A curse or a gift, it's hard to tell
But you accept this fact and carry on
And follow the path of a brand new dawn
The path of those with many minds, that reside in one body. Though at times can be difficult, can also have it's own unique advantages. Never lose hope in yourself, even if the others in your mind have given up.
A little poem for those whom (Like myself) Know how interesting it can be to have more then one person in your head. In other words M.P.D. (Multiple Personality Dissorder) Or now known as Dissassociative Personality Dissorder (D.I.D.).
Hope you all enjoyed it, kind of one of those that I just wanted to write something so had some....input you could say. Never tried one quite like this so let me know what you actually think. I would GREATLY appreciate any input, critisism, or anything you have to say good or bad. Thank you.
Now that being said, I will give a bit more background on this peice. I actually do have more than one personality, and the one in my head whom wrote this particular peice surprised me. (I know who it was as he left his calling card when he was done) Is nicknamed Vlad. He tends to be the more so.......hard heartened type. Very few people earn his trust much less respect. So for him to write this one threw me off a bit. Again, hope you enjoy and let me know what you think guys.
Hope you all enjoyed it, kind of one of those that I just wanted to write something so had some....input you could say. Never tried one quite like this so let me know what you actually think. I would GREATLY appreciate any input, critisism, or anything you have to say good or bad. Thank you.
Now that being said, I will give a bit more background on this peice. I actually do have more than one personality, and the one in my head whom wrote this particular peice surprised me. (I know who it was as he left his calling card when he was done) Is nicknamed Vlad. He tends to be the more so.......hard heartened type. Very few people earn his trust much less respect. So for him to write this one threw me off a bit. Again, hope you enjoy and let me know what you think guys.
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